dragonblade0's Diaryland Diary ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- crash and burn review 2 Contact: (5/5) Guestbook, notes, email, tagboard. Navigation: (10/10) Simple, orange, and towards the center. Only thing I don't like is the link effect but the navigation is clear. Errors: (4/5) None that I could find, other than your older page has a different layout. I really think you should have it so your index and older have the same layout. Updates: (14/15) Almost everyday with multiples on some days. Layout/Design: (25/25) I really like the drawing used in this layout. It made me smile. Very cool. Everything is aligned very nicely. I don't really like tails that follow cursors like the little blinking squares that follow me wherever I go. Thank goodness yours is only little blinking squares though. Another thing I really don't like, is the link effect. I really don't like how the words flip upside down. However, it doesn't make anything harder to read or make the layout tacky (plus the colours match the layout), so I'm not deducting points for that. Content: (32/35) Your still giving me, an English freak, spasms with your grammar. *twitch twitch* Please start capitalizing. Your entries are good in length and you've improved on the content some. In some of your more recent entries you've seemed to open up a little more so the reader can get to know you better. Good job! :-) Extras: (5/5) And I quote, reviews, guestmap, extras page. Would the reviewer come back? Probably. Kudos points: (0/5) None. Additional comments: I found this entry to be interesting.
Total Points: 95/100 5:15 a.m. - 2004-03-20 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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